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Arena Info

Contained in a metal dome with a glass skylight would be the Blazing Arena, warm temperatures are spread throughout the dome by two everlasting streams of fire. The heat warms up the metal walls and floor after some time, so caution and protective footwear are definitely recommended. Prolonged exposure can lead to early symptoms of heat exhaustion. The water vents are typically boiling and the earth disks can absorb the heat as well. It is forbidden for any participant to attempt to break the skylight in any way.

  • The rules can be seen here.

Dice Roll Room

With these rooms, dice rolls can be performed by participants. Be warned that these rooms contain logs, cheat and I will know. Simply put #d5 and you'll perform a roll. Links can be found in the comments section.


Match

VS

The coin toss was shown in favor of Zetsu/Torrun. He may take the first post or pass it off to Riku/Nero in the area below.

Zetsu: A boy enters the dome in a black and white hood and pants with running shoes of the same pallet wiping his sweaty forehead while complaining about the fierce heat "Seriously, why is this place so damn hot!? Do they expect me to fight in a freaking oven!? The boiling rock is less subtle!" Zetsu began to get his head together when he saw his opponent. Ready to commence the fight, he crossed his arms in an 'X' fashion with fire disks above the palm of his hands and presumed to throw them while exclaiming "GO FOR BROKE!"

Dice Roll Outcome: 4-Block

Riku To say that he was nervous was quite the understatement, finally his dream of becoming the #1 Probender had begun and he was going to make sure that he reached his goal.Walking into the dome the first thing he noticed was the heat it had only been five seconds and already he was sweating inside his cloak , sizing up his opponent he saw a very weird looking guy "he doesn't seem like too much of a problem" getting into position he waited for his opponent to make his move and when he did he instantly put up an air shield blocking the two fire disks and right after he jumped, spun in the air and sent an air kick and when he landed sent a air blast as well hoping both would strike.

DICE Roll Outcome: 2-Glancing Blow

Zetsu: "Shit! Airbender!" was all Zetsu could have said before he tried to dodge the air projectile. It grazed his ribcage a bit but he was in one piece. Feeling that he was getting too hot due to the heat of the arena, Zetsu quickly took off his black and white jacket and looked at his opponent with his now visible and luminating red left eye as he says "Time for a game of ultimate frisbee...". The child began to conjure up and throw a volley of 6 fire disks before rushing forward with fire propulsion.

Dice roll outcome: 2-Glancing blow

Riku "Shit,This is gonna be tough to dodge" thought Riku as he jumped in between the disks, dodging most of them but two managed to graze him,one got his left arm while the other lightly cut his right leg superficially, after landing he felt sings in both areas but he was fine overall, taking off his cloak because it was hampering his movement in this unbearable heat and then proceeded to send a volley of his own shooting 5 air blasts before Gliding forward to meet the kid head on.

DICE Roll Outcome:4-Block

Zetsu: Seeing the blasts of air coming from a clear distance, Zetsu stopped on his tracks and shot a fireball at each projectile to negate the opponent's attack. "As in blowing wind in my face was gonna end me. But thanks for cooling me down!" He said with a grin before cracking his knuckles and throws a fire arc powered punch at the Airbender running to him "Miss me, miss me, now you gotta EAT EMBER BITCH!"

Dice roll outcome: 2- Glancing blow

Riku seeing the the attack coming he slid underneath the fire arc, however though he was fast in sliding under the arc still managed to get him on his left shoulder then coming out of his slide he jumped and aimed a air kick directly at the kid's face then upon landing he attempted to strike his gut with a palm and send a air blast right as soon as his palm made a successful impact.

DICE Roll Outcome:4-Block


Zetsu: "Yeah, that is not happening bro...." Zetsu said to the Airbender as he quickly blocked the upcoming kick with his arms and cupped his hands to push the opponent's hand to the ground. To aim for his head, Zetsu jet propelled upwards for a heavy fire arced drop kick to the opponent's head in hopes for a serious injury "Wanna know what it feels like to be a burning bug?"

Dice roll outcome: 4-Block

Riku"That ain't happening either" Riku said using his air shield to block the fire arc thinking that this kid was way too cocky he only got in 3 blows and those weren't even game changing and then he aimed a air kick at his opponents chest and attempted to leg sweep the kid and if he succeeded in the sweep he would aim a air punch at his face.

DICE Roll Outcome:4-Block

Zetsu: "Fly like a butterfly..." Predicting the next move when the fighter moved his feet, Zetsu launched a fire disk through the projectile to not only negate it but fly to the bender's leg as well "....sting like a bitch!". Zetsu then propels further up to land behind the opponent and strike him in the back with a fire ball.

Dice roll outcome: 2-Glancing blow

Riku"Fuck" Riku hissed as the disk hit his leg causing another of the many cuts his body and he felt the kid land behind him and instantly jumped to the side but not before a blast gazed the top of his right shoulder making a light burn where it touched then when he landed he hissed "You Motherfucker I'm going to kick the shit out of you" he then let his rage fuel him as he sent a volley of 7 air blasts followed by to X shaped air swipes then gliding forward he attempted to land a air punch in the kid's gut.


DICE Roll Outcome:4-Block

Zetsu: "Ok, now you're just giving me target practice" Zetsu taunted as he launched fire balls at the projectiles coming his way "But I could use the exercise!". After the attacks were nullified, Zetsu threw 9 fire disks with three fire balls behind it to throw at the fighter while running behind it to prepare a fire punch to the stomach "Consider yourself a roasted fireflake"

Dice roll outcome: 1-Direct hit

Riku Riku tried out-maneuvering by jumping in between the gaps in the the disks but there were just to many and he ended up getting hit by all 9 of the fire disks and all three fire balls causing severe burns all across his body and to top it off he was hit directly in his stomach causing him to fly back and land on the ground rolling to a stop on his back."Fuck I thought this kid was going to be easy...hehe guess I was wrong," slowly getting back up to his feet he once again got into his stance albeit somewhat shakily and says in a raspy but dark voice " I'm going to..ha..ha.. kill you" he then proceeds to painfuly send and air swipe followed by an air blast.

DICE Roll Outcome: 2-Glancing Blow

Zetsu: Seeing the first attack, zetsu tried to dodge but got scratched at the arm in the process. "Awww that's adorable, you think your a thre- SHIT!" the boy screamed as he drastically crossed his from the air blast but at best pushed him to he center of the dome with bruised arms "Damnit that hurts! Well, not as much as the pain you are feeling right now but still...". At a sudden burst of speed, Zetsu launched a dozen different fire balls while zigzaging left and right firing fire disks inbetween all but oneof the gaps. "You don't scare me, not after the crap I've seen last month!" He said as he ran through the one gap to fire arc punch the opponent in the face this time for a knockout

Dice roll outcome: 1-Direct hit

RikuHe was helpless to dodge any of the incoming attacks seeing as his body was severely damaged, all he could do was stand their and take the assault head on and when they reached him he felt so much pain that he thought he was going to pass out from the pain but through his sheer force of will and his dark unforgiving anger he managed to hold on to his fading consciousness he fell to one knee steam rising off of his body and as his rage consumed him he only said one word "Kill...kill...Kill," rising up once again he charged the kid abandoning all reason and sent and air punch uppercut at the kids chin.


DICE Roll Outcome: 3-Miss/Dodge

Zetsu  : "Are you on a blood rage right now or are you just naturally stupid?" Zetsu mockingly asked as he dodged the slow punch and presumed to punch him in the stomach repeatedly "Sir, just lay on the ground and pretend to be dead. At least you won't receive an even greater beating". After the volley of punches, he would to try a fire arc uppercut hard enough to knock him in the air and maybe cup his hands together to generate and blast a fireball to his torso.

Dice roll outcome: 2-Glancing blow

Riku "Shut...ha...ha...Up!" he was he full on by the volley of punches but somehow he managed to avoid the uppercut just barely after stumbling away after receiving those punches. His Breath ragged, his body in pain, reached deep into his reservoir of anger and went on the offensive again sending 2 air blast and a air swipe even through all his pain


DICE Roll Outcome: 3-Miss/Dodge


Zetsu: Zetsu, without much effort, twisted and turned left and right in a form of a dance before stopping in a forward crouching stance. "Let's just end this fight before you get killed, stupid" Zetsu stated as he cupped his hands to generate a larger fireball with the help of his heat control ability "MAYBE IF YOU TRAINED MORE YOU WOULD LEARN TO TAKE A HIT! SCORCH!". He launched the largest fireball he could make at the now severely burnt and angry contestant.

Dice roll outcome: 2-Glancing blow


Riku "Fuck..me.." was all he could say as he tried to dive out of the way but to his severly damaged body he was delayed by a jolt of pain half way through the jump and was hit on his entire right side and spun in the air before landing on the ground with a thud. Slowly getting up you could see his body shakking from the immense stress of holding itself up with the damage it received and saying only "die" he charged again a bit more cautious this time and sent an air blast to distract his enemy and sent an air punch behind hit.


DICE Roll Outcome: 2-Glancing blow

Zetsu: As the child quickly ducked from the air made projectile, Zetsu was painfully greeted to a punch to the chest. Fortunately for the pyro, he realized the attack quickly enough to cross his arms to block. "Ow....shit...damnit...fuck!" He screamed while pausing as he flew back to the end of the dome like he skipped a rock through a pond. His body was surrounded by a large amount of smoke and dust until it slowly cleared to show Zetsu, left eye glowing a furious shade of red, crouching down with a fist on the ground and steam oozing out of his body "Mistake airhead.....big god-damn mistake!". He rushed to his enemy with jet propulsion for momentum to stop right in front of him to lay the hardest fire arc powered right hook he could throw. "I may be a kid, but I'm the most dangerous one there is!" Zetsu exclaimed as he laid the attack to his stomach as a large glimpse of fire flickered behind the opponent's back.

Dice roll outcome: 1-Direct Hit

Riku"Ugh!"pain...pain was all he felt he felt so much pain that the burning inferno that was his rage had vanished replaced by a dwindling candle flame as he coughed up blood on the ground barely standing,his vision becoming dark as he began to loose awareness.Even though he knew he was going to faint at any second his pride, anger, and desperation pushed him to go in for one last attack, so steeling himself he jumped forward and attempted his father's favorite move. Spinning forward he then kicked out hoping to land a Do Mawashi Kaiten and as soon as he landed he passed out but not before putting up the middle finger while smiling psychoticlly said, "I'll...kill...one...day" and fell forward face first.

DICE Roll Outcome:4-Block


Judging

Judge Zetsu (Torrun) Riku (Nero)
Onyx
  • Creative use of powers: 13/15
  • Effective use of powers: 12/15
  • Compliance with the RNG ruling: 10/10
  • Spelling and grammar: 2/5
  • Judges discretion: 3/5
  • Creative use of powers: 12/15
  • Effective use of powers: 11/15
  • Compliance with the RNG ruling: 10/10
  • Spelling and grammar: 1/5
  • Judges discretion: 2/5
Sub Total 40 36
Commentary
Hydro
  • Creative use of powers: 7/15
  • Effective use of powers: 6/15
  • Compliance with the RNG ruling: 10/10
  • Spelling and grammar: 2/5
  • Judges discretion: 2/5
  • Creative use of powers: 5/15
  • Effective use of powers: 3/15
  • Compliance with the RNG ruling: 10/10
  • Spelling and grammar: 1/5
  • Judges discretion: 2/5
Sub Total 27 21
Commentary
Total 67 57


Onyx's Commentary: Torrun- My number one concern with your writing is that all the mechanics for proper fight posts are there, but they just aren't being applied in the best way. On occasion, when viewing the scene and what was happening in my imagination, Zetsu would perform an action, (E.G getting struck in the chest) only for the action to be reversed with a different ending (-Zetsu was painfully greeted to a punch to the chest. Fortunately for the pyro, he realized the attack quickly enough to cross his arms to block.) This interrupts the flow and makes it confusing. I do believe, however, that if you keep this factor in mind, future posts will come out squeaky clean.

Nero- Reading this, it wasn't a difficulty to understand what was going on, but I notice that the grammar is very haphazard and sloppy. In 10 posts I count 16 sentences, which doesn't mesh well with all the information presented. This means lots of run-on's, and run-on sentences are detrimental to the overall quality of a post and the RP as a whole. That being said, I think grammatical structure is the only field you need solid work on, as when you improve in that, the others are bound to accompany.


Hydro's Commentary- Yeah Onyx did a fine job of covering all the grammatical issues. I feel like there should've been more effort to make the posts more realistic along with the dice rolls. (Like barely dodging shit, trying to dodge but failing). I feel like you guys were quick to forget that your chars were in a very hot arena. Moving around so much would wear down their stamina and thus make the fight harder.

I gave Nero a 3 point deduction for gliding in one of his posts, which is a banned power. Anyway, I also think you guys need to think more creatively when you attack, experiment with different powers and attacks. Either way, I feel like you both show great potential and it's easy to see what areas you need to improve in. Torrun wins, but mostly cuz of Nero's use of gliding AND his grammar issues were worse than Torrun's in my opinion.

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